Monday, July 26, 2010

Paragraph writing


How much do u understand about paragraph writing? I think if you read this article you will know more how to write a good paragraph. It identify important rule of writing, and You will get it easily, and you can bring it to use in learning of writing. Many books have paragraph such as magazines, newspapers, and novels. Each paragraph will tell different activities but same story.

I think many Thai students do not know about paragraph writing well. They often have to practice their writing skills everyday as possible. I think if they can write right paragraph it includes reading. They will know where main idea is in reading, and can do it fast.

AWL ENTIRE ANALYSIS

Text wordcount = 115

Frequency of list words detected = 7

Rounded Coverage = 6%

Words found

identify = (1)

paragraph = (6)

OXFORD 3000 ANALYSIS

Text wordcount = 115

Frequency of list words detected = 96

Rounded Coverage = 83%




Look old before your time.


Nowadays, we have many types of medicine to cure ourselves, but everyone needs to have a balance scale to live. Someone are thinking wrong that If they spend a lot of time to take medicine it is a good way to be healthy, but they never know it is destroying their healths silently

On the other hands, if they never take some pills when they are sick they will not be able to be strong by themselves. These mean we should stand on balancing. We cannot have a good health without medicine, and we should not use it is daily life too. There are four factors that make ourselves look old before our time

1) Over-medication.

2) Dehydration.

3) Malnutrition.

4) Smoking and alcohol intake.

5) Lack of sleep.

6) Lack of exercise.

7) Depression.

We should be careful of it before too late.

I think exercising is a good way to safe our live from this problem. It is only not to safe your life, but your body will get thin with out diet-pill. You can use medicine when you have to. not daily routine.

AWL ENTIRE ANALYSIS

Text wordcount = 186

Frequency of list words detected = 1

Rounded Coverage = 1%

Words found

factors = (1)

OXFORD 3000 ANALYSIS

Text wordcount = 186

Frequency of list words detected = 152

Rounded Coverage = 82%


Relax by playing golf


This article tells you about golf can be thing it is not only sport that helps you relax, meet new friends and have fun together. It brings you to place where you can play golf with family or your friends.


I think this news it can help
and make plan who want to play golf but do not know where will go. You can make friends and share information about golf to strange people and another level at there. You can exchange about data that they and you never know before.

AWL ENTIRE ANALYSIS

Text wordcount = 91

Frequency of list words detected = 2

Rounded Coverage = 2%

Words found

data = (1)

relax = (1)

OXFORD 3000 ANALYSIS

Text wordcount = 91

Frequency of list words detected = 80

Rounded Coverage = 88%


It is not easy to be a golf pro




I found this news form www.bangkokpost.com. It is about a professional golf player. According to this article that to be a professional golfer is not easy. It has two ways which you can choose to be a golf pro. It is up to you what you want to be.



In my opinion, you can be a professional in every sport. You just extremely focus on it and seriously practice every day. It is like golf, if you always do it, you will be a professional golf player in someday. I know and everyone knows thi
s well. If the first time you do it is not good that you think. Do not give up and keep doing. You will successed as you want.


AWL ENTIRE ANALYSIS

Text wordcount = 122

Frequency of list words detected = 6

Rounded Coverage = 5%

Words found

focus = (1)

professional = (4)

found = (1)

OXFORD 3000 ANALYSIS

Text wordcount = 122

Frequency of list words detected = 103

Rounded Coverage = 84%